Comment For Kids (part 1)

I visited Mr. Georend's Class Blog and I left comments on Chandler, Maddie, Dmitriy, Jacob and Shelby. Their post were so intresting and fun to read. They all had very diffrent post, well written and very very creative, they made me laugh!

Chandler was the first child's post that I read. He wrote about Running The Mile, which is at his P.E class they have to run a mile around the football field. He dreaded running this mile. He said in his post that it felt like he was running forever and that his legs felt like jello, and his stomach would get queesy! But when he was finally done he went to go get his grade, and was a little disappointed because he didn't do as well as he did the years before. He said that he would of liked to improve his grades. I commented on his post and said that it was great that he finished the mile, and that I knew exactly what he meant by saying his legs felt like Jello.

Maddie's post was about Dress Like a Penguin Day. She said that the reason she tought of this day was becuase one of her friends fell down at school one day and when she got up, she was walking funny; and to immiate her she walked like a penguin. She stated in her post that she would like everyone to dress up like a penguin by wearing flippers and a stubby beak and to eat fished shaped cookies all day. Also they would go ice-skating untill they ache. She would like her Dress Like a Penguin Day be a National Holiday in January.

Dmitriy's was the third child that I posted a comment on. He wrote about his dog Madi, and how he let her out and she saw a squirl and began to chase it. While his dad was telling Madi to come back the dog just kept chasing after the squirl. Also that the squirl ran really fast and ran up a tree. Then he let his dog back in and he sayed that Madi was really thirsty from all the running.

Jacob's post was really funny. He wrote about Dance like a Hippi Day. He wanted his holiday to be on January 3rd. He said it all began when he drove by a man with BIG puffy hair and was doing a weird dance. Then he said in his story that he then went home and done the dance, and improved it. Then went to school and showed all his friends how to do the weird funny dance. That's how he came up with Dance Like a Hippi Day.

Shelby wrote about a Horse Camp that she had visited. And at this camp she met two horses, Sue and Smokey. She explained how she rode the horse named Sue for three hours bare back. She also played a game with the horses, where she acted like she was in a horse show, she sayed "I acted like a snotty rich girl showing my horse". Too funny! Then after they rode horses her grandpa came to the stables and they all went and ate Marshmellos. She said she misses the farm and wants to go back.

Reading these post from Jacob, Dmitriy, Maddie, Shelby, and Chandler really brought back memories from when I was in School and that young (I miss those days). I really reading all their post,they were very creative and told great stories. This assignment was really cool.